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Snow Storm and Icicle

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Meet Snow Storm and Icicle :D Two more MLP:FiM OCs :D

Snow Storm is a unicorn pony from Canterlot who also attends Princess Celestia's Academy for Gifted Unicorns (Is that the right name?!) He recieved Icicle during his entrance exam.

Now, before you start whining about him being a Gary-Stu (which he totally is :XD:) let's see if I can cover the basises of possible whining:
:bulletblue:He's a unicorn who attends Celestia's school! He's a male version of Twilight Sparkle! Umm, if there's a whole school, Twilight Sparkle is obviously not the only unicorn who know magic. Unicorns are magic -___-;;
:bulletblue:He has a dragon just like Twilight! The entrance exam is hatching a dragon egg. I'm assuming that the unicorn's recieve their dragon as a helper, but because there are no other canon unicorn/dragon duos from the school, I cannot be sure.
:bulletblue: My other differences from Twilight Sparkle include that he's wealthy, angry, sarcastic, deals more with herbs and such for magic, etc.

Snow Storm is also the star for an upcoming fic/fancomic I hope to do. So we'll have to see what becomes of him :D

About the picture, I really have a different style when it comes to ponies. The legs and head are the most different. And this was my first time drawing a dragon in this sort of style, so I'm very different than the original style. I tried to exagerate that a little. I think she turned out really cute :love:

Characters and art (c) Moi
Style influenced by Lauren Faust
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4100x3700px 2.18 MB
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

First of all. MLP it toally my secret crack.

Brohoof!

Ahem, on to the critique. You have the style down really well, the actually lineart could use a little straightening out but everyone has problems with that, so I wouldn't worry about it too much.

The background is simple but still charming so I think you did a fairly good job with it. I'd love to see some clouds or like a pegasus (hope I spelled that right, too lazy tolook it up)

Now on to the characters. Snow storm doesn't remind me of twlight at all! Nor does Icicle remind me of Spike so no need to worry there. Honestly even the relationship between Snow and Icicle seems different from Twi and Spike. In a good way of course.

Love both of their expressions as it get a suprising amount of their personalities across. I must say Seeing a ponies that isn't all rainbows and sparkles is a bit refreshing.

I haven't read any MLP fanfiction yet but I'll more likely than not be checking this one out.